Sentences
July 7, 2009
[Where I just wrote out random, disjointed sentences directed to me by my brain. So what do these say about me?]
It happened.
Wait a minute, so what is that in the sky?
Well, I just woke up in the morning and saw it.
Where are you going later, again?
I don’t really know but if it’s all they’ve got…
I went there yesterday— it was all gone.
I looked into the glass of water; was it you that I saw?
Why do you think she left then?
Did anyone of you leave this place at any point in time?
Why do I feel this sudden, sharp ache when I tip my elbow over like this all the time?
I was looking at the screen— the paint stain irritated me.
I was looking down from the edge; was that you?
I walked home the other day.
It was raining.
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xiuli | July 7, 2009 at 10:29
Just like I said, they are seem to indicate loss and/or confusion, peppered with nostalgia.
I like the sentences more than the “caw, caw, caw” article, LOL!
Dunno what else to call it by, so sorry.
Not trying to say that the other article isn’t good of course! It’s excellent~ I liked the poetic feel too~ However much of it that managed to successfully ‘waft’ its course through me.
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xiuli | July 7, 2009 at 10:30
* they seem to
Dang, full of typos today~
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yeeherng | July 11, 2009 at 06:10
What is the ‘caw, caw, caw’ article? Sounds interesting, LOL
I love the sentences! Don’t know why, but they make me feel peaceful? I like ‘Did anyone of you leave this place at any point in time?’ especially!
And two of your sentences tell me that you’re looking at life like a detached soul — the point of view of a passerby. Just a guess.
P.S. You changed emoticons! Haha cute.